(either I lost part of it, or it just ends strangely). I think I need to rewrite the end or continue it. Also, I think I didn't really punctuate on purpose, but now, I think that's bothering me. I definitely need to work more on this. The last line makes no sense. Nevertheless, I kind of like the part that I wrote. Here it is:
Blank Page
confrontational
white rectangle
punches me in the face
as I caress it with ruminating paws
while dependent clause punctuates
my lack of knowing
where my road is going
thread weaving it altogether frays
they’re filling their spaces at manic paces
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